Please, paraphrase (re-write) the paragraph below for 10 points?

The ability to correctly perform its intended function of the temperature measuring device has a margin of error of 0.5 degrees, so the difference in temperature was twenty degrees Celsius. plus or minus half a degree divided by twenty times ten, resulting in two point five percent. My calculations indicate that this error is significant. In order to record more accurate readings, a digital thermometer will be used for its precise temperature read-out. Additionally, the accuracy of the 2 d.p. scale is � 0.01 � 100 � 10 = 0.01 percent. Despite the low percentage error, the accuracy could still be improved by using a 3 d.p. scale. This has shown to be a more precise scale. Another error is the partial combustion of the alcohol. This occurred because oxygen could not reach the flame. Further, evaporation occurs as a result of boiling water. The energy used here affects the final calculation. The amount of wick in each alcohol burner varied leaving room for additional inequalities. Another potential pitfall is the inability of the flames of the heated alcohol to reach the calorimeter, thereby affecting the change in temperature measured over time. For example, suppose ethanol heated up the water quickly because its flame was touching the calorimeter and so less alcohol would be burnt as it heated up the water quickly, but if methanol wick was small and less flame came out of it and cant really touch the calorimeter then this is a slower time and more alcohol will be burnt. As a result the calculations done for these experiments would be inaccurate based on these variables.