Would anyone like to read my story please?

That was Absolutely BRILLIANT! Completely breath taking! You are An AMAZING writer. It's so hauntingly beautiful! Oh, I would buy every copy of that just so no one else could have it. lol. I could picture everything so clearly, and actually HEAR it. It's slightly dark, but that's another reason I ADORE it. I'm so jealous of your writing skills! It's surprising, beautiful beyond belief, and it just grabs you and pulls you in. It's like your there with the characters. It has so much power and emotion! Bravo! You have to get that published before I burst into tears, completely heart broken. :) I can't believe how amazing that was. Holy crap, I'm crying???